1. Emily Cale says:

    Very hot! Can’t wait to see more.

  2. Whoa!!! 6 sentences is not enough, I need the entire page! 🙂

  3. Very good. Glad I have power this week. Last Sunday was boring. No blogs to read.

  4. Okay, I need more than just six! Great job!

  5. Cara Bristol says:

    Very intriguing…hell of a motivator!

  6. Lindsay says:

    Love the visual here

  7. Alix says:

    wonderful six, you managed the dialogue beautifully.

  8. Vivien Dean says:

    Great dialogue. Thanks for sharing!

  9. Eleri Stone says:

    Love it. Something about this kind of setup pushes all my buttons.

  10. Yowza! Can’t wait to read it!

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