FREE SHORT STORY | Jennifer Probst


  1. So wonderful. Have you tried lit reviews and magazines for this?

    • jennifer121 says:

      Thanks SO much for the complement. I did try a few different magazines for short stories but I couldn’t seem to sell it. It wasn’t “literary” enough! Got some great feedback though. Thanks for reading!

  2. Fabulous story, Jen. Absolutely loved it.

  3. jennifer121 says:

    Thanks so much, Wendy – means a lot to me!

  4. Regina Richards says:

    Truly wonderful story, Jen. It should be published.

  5. Jennifer,

    What an incredible story. You should try Writers Digest’s “Short Short” contest if it is under 1500 words. The deadline is Dec. 1. E-mail me if you need the details.

    I loved this story. Don’t quit on subbing it.

    Abbi 🙂

  6. Very good story. Just keep writing.

  7. Paige Morgan says:

    Ah-mazing! You are truly gifted. Thank you for sharing your gift!

  8. Lauren Elizabeth says:

    Your very talented. Does he end up turning his life around? How did she know his name? good luck getting it published!

    • Jennifer says:

      HI Lauren! Yes, he does end up turning his life around. I believe that happened. And she knows his name because I think she is a sort of angel. Glad you enjoyed it!

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